i was excited but annoyed at the same time so i thought about the good things that will happen and then i realised there were no good things so i just closed my eyes and walked. by this time i was in the water without noticing i opened my eyes and i could see the plank i go to grab it and i stunk like .I wanted out so i tried to run out and then i slipped and got stuck and i was soaked, i needed to grab the plank again and get out so i grab a stick used it to dig my feet out i got one undone but my other foot was to deep so i dived under and tried to dig it out. i grabbed the plank and ran back to the start, I was back out and I was soaked and stunk, i needed to change so we went back to the lodge and i quickly got dressed ,then we went back out. that day i learnt i should take every opportunity that comes up, even if it’s jumping in a swamp.
Tuesday, 5 September 2017
creative writing
it was a freezing day, we had a challenge at the swamp trying to cross it without falling in. and in a long struggle there it was, the other side we had made it,now all there was left to do was grab the plank that landed in the water, no one was dumb enough to do that. But me. i knew it would stink like a skunks ass but still it is was the only thing i wanted to do on camp.
so i slowly walked to the edge, keep thinking should i do this or not i knew i would be walking the rest wet and i would stink and apart of me was saying no but i couldn't give up so i kept walking up to it.
i was excited but annoyed at the same time so i thought about the good things that will happen and then i realised there were no good things so i just closed my eyes and walked. by this time i was in the water without noticing i opened my eyes and i could see the plank i go to grab it and i stunk like .I wanted out so i tried to run out and then i slipped and got stuck and i was soaked, i needed to grab the plank again and get out so i grab a stick used it to dig my feet out i got one undone but my other foot was to deep so i dived under and tried to dig it out. i grabbed the plank and ran back to the start, I was back out and I was soaked and stunk, i needed to change so we went back to the lodge and i quickly got dressed ,then we went back out. that day i learnt i should take every opportunity that comes up, even if it’s jumping in a swamp.
i was excited but annoyed at the same time so i thought about the good things that will happen and then i realised there were no good things so i just closed my eyes and walked. by this time i was in the water without noticing i opened my eyes and i could see the plank i go to grab it and i stunk like .I wanted out so i tried to run out and then i slipped and got stuck and i was soaked, i needed to grab the plank again and get out so i grab a stick used it to dig my feet out i got one undone but my other foot was to deep so i dived under and tried to dig it out. i grabbed the plank and ran back to the start, I was back out and I was soaked and stunk, i needed to change so we went back to the lodge and i quickly got dressed ,then we went back out. that day i learnt i should take every opportunity that comes up, even if it’s jumping in a swamp.
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Hey Donovan, I enjoyed reading you're piece of writing. It made me think back to all the fun i had on camp, i reckon you did a great job, It would of taken a lot of courage to go in to the water on a freezing day. Maybe next time you could write more about the challenge that as set for you too complete and add in more detail, but overall you did a great job, well done :)
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