English persuasive writing

IWhy do a test when the reward isn't the best?

kids should get paid for good grades

List of points: it would make kids try to get better grades and motivate them and make them listen in class.

I think kids should get paid for good grades because it would motivate them to try harder every time   With a motivation kids will try hard in class and study more often when they have the opportunity too, instead of bunking  kids will come to school learning and studying more and more so they are ready for test For example, a lot of parents pay their children for good grades and are happy to see their kids having a good education by motivating them with cash. Many websites agree with this and a lot of parents will agree too.

With the motivation, It will make kids want better grades. With money involved kids will want better grades to gain a reward they will also learn doing good things can lead to good consequences. For example, if I was offered $20 to get a high merit or an excellence I would study as much as I could and try and get a good score. 69% of people agree with this according to www.debate.org and 31% of people don't.

Also With money kids will be more focused on their work.If this ever happens I think a lot of kids won't be playing games and all that I think they will be learning and focusing on their work instead kids will be trying to learn and doing the right thing. For example, a comment left on debate.org says kids will be learning more and become smarter by focusing, and getting money out of they might also learn to save their money instead of spending. If parents do it for their kids and those kids get good grades all the time so why don't we do it

So I think kids should get paid for good grades since they will try to get good grades and focus more and be motivated to try. What's the point of a good grade when you don't get paid?